Process Post #6 - Peer Review 1

Going through the peer review done by Danielle (https://daniellepebres.com/pub-101/peer-review-1/), she gave many encouraging words that helped me to feel more confident about my website. Through this process post, I wanted to go through what’s going well and what points of improvement through the review.


Things going well:

  • Name of the website
    • She enjoyed the name “Chewing Balls” 
    • The name of the website was able to pique her interest in the site

  • Home Page
    • It grabs attention with a clear headline and caption – allowing users to know what they expect.
    • Clean and modern
    • The website’s colour colour palette matches the logo, resembling milk tea and boba

  • About me Page
    • Allows the audience to get to know who I am, my personality, my charms, just who I am
    • Tells what kind of audience I am targeting

Things that I could improve:

  • The website uses many neutral colours, with different blocks of colour contrasting with the white background. 
  • Adjusting text in the review post
  • Adjust spacing in the post
  • Adjusting the Boba Review Page
  • Have an updated tier list in each post
 

I appreciate Danielle’s ongoing feedback on my website, so I’d like to implement her input. Here are some of the updated aspects I added through her suggestions.  

Fixed boba review page layout

Photo of the Boba Review Page

I tried making it a bit cleaner, having six reviews at a time, not cramming everything on one page

Updated Tier List on Home Page

Added the most up-to-date tier list on the home page, so readers won’t have to go through each review to find each ranking.

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